2018 Spring Contest Winner: 2nd Place, New Poets

the cherries were ripe

by Linda Golaszewski

 

the cherries were ripe

near a lake

big enough to be touched by tides.

Cherries bent low, full

no one else had picked

them no one knows ripeness

anymore

how red the fruit

can get when dead ready

to be picked, the kids

scattered to free the branches

from their harvest. Pie cherries

ready for their next incarnation

sour with a bitter pit

sour with a passing fancy of sweet

Tell me then, did you

have to, tell me when the children

were running through to the wind and the wild

taste of feral fruit.

 

knocking my heart to the ground

the wind pulled like the tide from my lungs

 

and I followed you around

and I followed you around

the children

the red fruit

the heavy branches

you heart gone through a thicket

of fruit of the wrong kind of ripeness

 

and I followed you around

til the red of the cherries stained my lips

and the brush scratched my hands

bleeding in disbelief.

 

 

Judge’s comments

The poems in the “New Poet” category were impressive and explored a wide array of themes. I enjoyed reading each and every one, especially in this category. I have a special place in my heart for new poets, because we all have to start somewhere. The second-prize poem “The Cherries Were Ripe” is a lyrical work that examines something as simple as ripe cherries and weaves sustained meaning throughout each line. It speaks to the complexities of relationships in a lovely way.

—Connie Post

 

 

Linda Golaszewski is at the beginning of re-starting her published writing career with a successful submission to the Kate Snow contest/Timberline Review. Previously she was a part of a writing and publishing collective in Springfield, Illinois. She lives in Portland, Oregon, where she teaches, sings and writes poetry and prose.

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